Fall in love

Fall in love

A Poem by Blossom
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can we try, I know it can happen... let's fall in love again

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Let the shooting stars pass
as they did the first night
I want to try again
I want to do this right
you walked into my life
thinking you were invited
why did you overstay
but leave me brokenhearted
I know we fell in love
I know you never believed
I beg of you to try
and give me a chance to please
I know it can happen
let the shooting stars pass
give us a chance
I only ask that
Come Love,
let's fall in love again

© 2010 Blossom


Author's Note

Blossom
Hope u guys liked this... this is for one of my really good friends. Who suffered a major heartbreak. So Please Review.

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an awesome write... inspiring in all the right ways...however...sometimes its letting go of things means you are stronger..its just a personal opinion...
that being said...I cant that the pen dipped in sadness and heartache tends to produce touching writes..this is one of them...


Posted 8 Years Ago


Awe that was nice never give up on love esp those who show.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i just fell in love with this poem
i really love the last line
"lets fall in love again"

powerful line M'dear ^^
hoping to read more of your writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such celestial imagery of a lost romance! Really is one of your best pieces! It hold depth!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this poem a lot. It all flows together, like it was meant to be. The shooting stars lines are extremely effective.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like this. I find myself feeling like alot of the time. Its easy to relate to.

Posted 9 Years Ago


the line about the shooting stars really takes it up a notch, and I love the way you formulated the last line "let's fall in love again", that is such a powerful line! lovely. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! I mean seriously this is amazing. So effective. Defintely my favourite poem by you and one of the best peoms written on this website. You did a really great job here, I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on August 17, 2010
Last Updated on September 18, 2010
Tags: love, sadness

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Blossom
Blossom

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada



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Love to read and write enjoy almost everything love chocolate mostly write dark poetry but really I'm a really outgoing and hyper child. Weird... I know! Lets101 Quizzes - Online Quizzes Le.. more..

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