Please Handle With Care

Please Handle With Care

A Poem by Blossom

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

China doll

with eyes marked with Kohl

 

Albaster skin

with scars that bleed

like spider webs

they've been weaved

 

soft plump lips

whisper words

that haunt not only your dreams

 

'Please Handle with Care' she whispers

 

 

© 2011 Blossom


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Eerily beautiful...

Posted 8 Years Ago


sent a chill down my spine.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this was beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


I read pain and sadness that one has gone through and needs tender loving care to get through it. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


LOVE IT. When I read it I associated it with the image you posted. Looks are deceiving because we depend on them so much. What I got from this is that although her appearance may be "freaky" or scarred, she is fragile on the inside. Maybe that is what rendered her so broken in the first place.

Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww. That made me hurt on the inside for a moment. What a beautiful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think this is really amazing. i really like the whole idea of the prom. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's very good but with the second to last line, you don't clarify what what else it haunts. Other than that it was very good.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2011
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Blossom
Blossom

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada



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