Please Handle With Care

Please Handle With Care

A Poem by Blossom




















China doll

with eyes marked with Kohl


Albaster skin

with scars that bleed

like spider webs

they've been weaved


soft plump lips

whisper words

that haunt not only your dreams


'Please Handle with Care' she whispers



© 2011 Blossom

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Eerily beautiful...

Posted 11 Years Ago

sent a chill down my spine.

Posted 12 Years Ago

this was beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago

I read pain and sadness that one has gone through and needs tender loving care to get through it. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago

LOVE IT. When I read it I associated it with the image you posted. Looks are deceiving because we depend on them so much. What I got from this is that although her appearance may be "freaky" or scarred, she is fragile on the inside. Maybe that is what rendered her so broken in the first place.

Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Aww. That made me hurt on the inside for a moment. What a beautiful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I think this is really amazing. i really like the whole idea of the prom. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

It's very good but with the second to last line, you don't clarify what what else it haunts. Other than that it was very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on May 20, 2011
Last Updated on May 20, 2011



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