While watching you...💖

While watching you...💖

A Poem by ynpatil

Yaddu says...

While watching you, 
My heart thinks, 
To write, 
You in words. 

While watching you, 
I forget the words, 
But still, 
Continue writing you.

While watching you,
I dont need paper and pen, 
I write you, 
In my heart ❤

While watching you, 
I forget each and everything, 
Sadness, sorrow, stress, 
But not your cute Smile.

While watching you,
I am in a perfect Paradise,
Where you are my princess', 
And I am your King.

While watching you,
All love stories are our's,
Where you are my Juliet,
And I am your Romeo.

While watching you,
This hot sunny day,
Exchanges the,
Cool romantic rainy day.

While watching you,
You are mine,
I am your's,
You & me rules the world.

© 2017 ynpatil


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This is oh so lovely, such a wonderful and beautiful write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow. ......nice lines.... It's true everything is invisible when someone means everything to us.... Continue writing.... And wish you.. good luck

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. ......nice lines.... It's true everything is invisible when someone means everything to us.... Continue writing.... And wish you.. good luck

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shruthi

6 Years Ago

Ya sure.... And thank you too for ur good wishes...life is short... Dreaming and writing is best way.. read more
ynpatil

6 Years Ago

yes..yes.. you are correct.
shruthi

6 Years Ago

Okay..... Fine poet

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ynpatil
ynpatil

Mumbai, India



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