Eve

(Parade 1/5)

Swiped left, swipe right

Spending Friday just doing that…

Swipe right, swiped left

Why am I doing this exactly?

Will I know, maybe this works… maybe?

Waiting… patiently waiting for a match.

Introverted fool as I am, who does not know what to do.

Inside the mind wondering, keeps on wandering

Idealistic… Iridescent made eyes glow sees

Paradise of unique bountiful garden roses at your fingertips  

Promises to pick up the thorns with delicate care

Placid like atmosphere listening to my beating heart,

Erupted! By a red dot

Excites the late evening of July!

Ended up waiting to expire until the coming of Eve. 

 

Author's Note

reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved how the words danced and moved to perfect meaning dear poet.
"Paradise of unique bountiful garden roses at your fingertips
Promises to pick up the thorns with delicate care
Placid like atmosphere listening to my beating heart,"
I loved the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[YanZeros]

Hi Sir Coyote, I'm so glad to receive your reviews again. You've been so kind to me, you're one of the first few writers who's giving me the best reviews together with Margie since 2016.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy your work and have some fun, be careful.

[YanZeros]

I already deleted the app after 3 weeks of trying it out. And I don't have that much energy to keep up. 🤣

[YanZeros]

Thank you Sir, you too! Stay healthy and keep safe. 🙏☺️

[duff]

I've never been on any of those apps but from what I know and have heard I think you were very creative in conveying the subject. I don't have any social media other than this so I've been called strange since I don't have facebook or other platforms, lol.

"Promises to pick up the thorns with delicate care." I like that line. Clever work my friend!

[YanZeros]

You're alright, some of my friends offline are not using or deleted their social media accounts. Thanks duff! for your review and liking this piece :)

[barleygirl]

A little bit familiar with how these apps work, so I'm following this evening drudgery until the last verse & the red dot . . . can only guess this must mean "a match"!?! Anyhow, what appeals to me is how honest you are about this narrator's intentions & reactions to this newfangled way of meeting people. Even tho this isn't written to show a sad scenario (I think) . . . that's what comes across. It's hard not to equate this sad isolated dating scene with the new pandemic normal where people are not seeing each other's smiles anymore or feeling much skin these days. Nicely original way to write about the online dating phenom (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[YanZeros]

Yes you are right! thank you for your review Ms. Margie. I'm glad this poem able to reach you..'Original' the best compliment ever. I'm so happy that I'm able to convey it well even with just the use of simple words.