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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Crown

Crown

A Poem by YanZeros
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Parade 3/5

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Weigh light as a feather
The wind caught you with ease 
I couldn't help but notice 
Your,
Sunkissed fair skin
Trickles down your cheeks 
Left a mark on your unflawed beauty... 
Awed in wonder, has she always been like this? 
Like a swan wearing a queen's crown
Sits at the top of a current body of water
Poised, dignified, and brimming with confidence. 
As she passes by on the scenery... 
As glorious as her...

© 2020 YanZeros


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YanZeros
reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

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Swans are beautiful, graceful regal creatures. I am in awe of the when I see them on the river, just as you are captivated by your own swan who has stolen your heart. A love poem in my opinion and nicely done.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Christine! Someone just caught my attention. 😂 I'm glad you enjoyed the.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Very much so. Thank you.
A love affair intimately described with a deft touch. The imagery paints a picture you can't escape. Well written. Definitely enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

3 Years Ago

hi Duff! Thank you for leaving a review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
YanZeros

3 Years Ago

the imagery paints a picture you can't escape ~ WOW!
This was a wonderful We need to describe beauty and its simplest form. Without giving it a face and without objectifying it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

3 Years Ago

Thank you Anastasia 😊 👑

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YanZeros
YanZeros

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