Seen

Seen

A Poem by YanZeros
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August 1/5

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You're a symphony
Distract my reality
Played heartstrings in me

Silhouette figure
Desert lines of Sahara
Found wanting to touch
 
Plains of sunset rays
Leaving footprints of her scent
Horse riding princess

Young and beautiful 
Chasing goals and adventure
Away to be seen

Feet stuck in the mud
Waken from a distant dream
Of August the 1st





© 2020 YanZeros


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YanZeros
reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

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There are so many elements here that catch the eye. Definitely the romanticism and the adventure. I can picture the horses galloping through the desert. Searching and chasing for love. The excitement of that one person who captures everything we have inside ourselves. It also feels like a dream. It has that dreamy aspect. It's fun to read poetry that brings you back for a second and third read to see the hidden clues. Nice work!

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

3 Days Ago

hi Duff! thank you for your detailed review! :) I'm glad you liked it. :)



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There are so many elements here that catch the eye. Definitely the romanticism and the adventure. I can picture the horses galloping through the desert. Searching and chasing for love. The excitement of that one person who captures everything we have inside ourselves. It also feels like a dream. It has that dreamy aspect. It's fun to read poetry that brings you back for a second and third read to see the hidden clues. Nice work!

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

3 Days Ago

hi Duff! thank you for your detailed review! :) I'm glad you liked it. :)

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