Silent Flower

Alive 2/5

If can't explain why
choose to act this way.

Gotten worse overtime
Without knowing the slightest reason.

What to do, in silence there's the answer
You've been pushed away, so away should go.

I don't want to blame the moon
Nor the stars for this misfortune.

I'm tired of interpreting the silent actions,
It's better to lay down in surrender.

When the words stop
We speak in silence.

Which is far more dreadful
For a seeker of answers.

This isn't my place
I never belong here.

Go away, stop, don't keep coming back
Are the silent words getting louder.


That even my throat hurts...


The thorns in this flower screams
Hands bleed. I'm letting it go. Forever.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry my friend.
"The thorns in this flower screams
Hands bleed. I'm letting it go. Forever."
I loved the complete poem and the above lines. Perfect, hard and worthwhile. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[YanZeros]

Thank you, Sir! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[barleygirl]

For me, your poem describes the type of person who must verbalize every little thing that he/she sees, thinks or feels. I'm the opposite of this, so I live alone in the wilderness. But this poem shows why I prefer solitude . . . it's enuf to drive me crazy, the way some people need to analyze everything over & over, hoping to make sense out of the inherent senselessness that life is! Your poem feels like it starts out a little more calm, but then it spins more & more out of control -- nice way to make the words represent where the storyline is taking us (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[YanZeros]

Thank you very much for your review, Ms. Margie :)

[YanZeros]

Ms. Margie wherever you are take care and God bless you :)

[Chris Shaw]

That last couplet plays heavy on the reader's mind. When we are out of place in a relationship and there is discomfort and pain, then maybe it is best to move on. That's where your lines took me. All the best.

Chris

[YanZeros]

Hi! Christine, thank you for your review :)

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)