I Tell Myself

How I see me.

I tell myself

So many times

Never to give up or stop fighting for love

But every time I get in amour

And wait for the first blow

All I do is run and fall

Fall and fall, into myself

No blood spilt

 And not even sweat leaves my soul

 

I tell myself

So many times

That I will cry and that I will give

It all

But I can’t seem to break

Break myself

So slowly, the girl I knew

Succumbs to her faith

 

And I scream, and I scream and I scream!

Because I just can’t take it, not anymore, not by myself.

I want to yell

But it means nothing, nothing more than people’s thoughts

And those that I keep to myself

So I might as well, just scream because I can’t even feel

If I was helped

Author's Note

Just read it, I think (: And maybe review it...?

Reviews

[TurtleClark]

its people like you that are so amazing at this

[crystallized illusions]

These is really nicely written. It's extremely deep, and personally I really enjoyed reading it. Probably because I can relate to it so well.
Amazingly done.

( p.s: thank you for your thoughts on my own writing :] )

[Whales]

Jeez! This is wonderful! I can actually feel the emotion in this. i dont know how to explain it but when i read the line that goes "And I scream, and I scream and I scream!" i felt like i wanted to scream too...very very very well written.

[just is]

So very nicely written and expressed. Strong feelings

[khalid]

very nicely written, many nice images you have drown. each image is more sweet than the others. i liked the words picking and the flow of the words as well...very nice writing

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. i relate to all the feelings that you've expressed ... you're a very gifted poet and i look forward to reading more of your work ...