I Tell Myself

I Tell Myself

A Poem by Yara
"

How I see me.

"

I tell myself

So many times

Never to give up or stop fighting for love

But every time I get in amour

And wait for the first blow

All I do is run and fall

Fall and fall, into myself

No blood spilt

 And not even sweat leaves my soul

 

I tell myself

So many times

That I will cry and that I will give

It all

But I can’t seem to break

Break myself

So slowly, the girl I knew

Succumbs to her faith

 

And I scream, and I scream and I scream!

Because I just can’t take it, not anymore, not by myself.

I want to yell

But it means nothing, nothing more than people’s thoughts

And those that I keep to myself

So I might as well, just scream because I can’t even feel

If I was helped

© 2012 Yara


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its people like you that are so amazing at this

Posted 12 Years Ago


These is really nicely written. It's extremely deep, and personally I really enjoyed reading it. Probably because I can relate to it so well.
Amazingly done.

( p.s: thank you for your thoughts on my own writing :] )

Posted 12 Years Ago


Jeez! This is wonderful! I can actually feel the emotion in this. i dont know how to explain it but when i read the line that goes "And I scream, and I scream and I scream!" i felt like i wanted to scream too...very very very well written.


Posted 12 Years Ago


So very nicely written and expressed. Strong feelings

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nicely written, many nice images you have drown. each image is more sweet than the others. i liked the words picking and the flow of the words as well...very nice writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


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. i relate to all the feelings that you've expressed ... you're a very gifted poet and i look forward to reading more of your work ...

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