A Goodnight Love...

A Goodnight Love...

A Poem by Alex Boyd
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Just a freestyle poem

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At last my lady forbid me not... For my wrong doings what of I??? To say goodnight??? Mustn't I always forget you are the queen of the vampires and sleep for you is of death....Ruler of the night sky and at day you are at ease..... No man has known such beauty before, for you slumber doing the light... I merely stumbled upon you and vexed I became by your lovely art... Though I seek to devour your essence of purity still you keep me at bay but for how long???? I am deaf by the tongue and blind by the ears but my eyes they do taste. Yes they do taste sweet beauty for it is destiny to speak of such admiration of a very fair lady... God's hands were ever so kind when molding you...

© 2014 Alex Boyd


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Vampires seems like a whole world one must study; I enjoyed reading Vampires in the Lemon Grove recently, in which the author talks about the pair of vampires that drink lemon juice getting off of the blood hunger-lust

I like the idea of the queen ruler of electricity nights, in which it is not wrong to be up late; one should not fear sleep or tiredness for the sake of adrenalin or inspiration, wherefore?

Posted 6 Years Ago


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has a kinda Poe feel to it, i always love Vampire work so this is no exception, well crafted work, enjoyed the story and wonder if its part of some future tale? very well done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Alex Boyd

6 Years Ago

A future tale could happen...
Man, the line "i am deaf by the tongue and blind by the ears but my eyes they do taste" to end it well with "God's hands were ever so kind when molding you"...
The whole thing is good, but these lines at the seasoning....like why were Gods hands generous? Well ya eyes had seen it all..and thru one sense, all other senses became activated all by sight....for what i interpret is a stranger...but maybe you speaking of being friend zoned

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Alex Boyd

6 Years Ago

You know I'm friend zoned lol but anyway yes I was trying to think outside the box...
God's hands were ever so kind when molding you...

An ethereal love write to the lady of darkness. Loved this last line and I am sure she is swayed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Alex Boyd

6 Years Ago

I hoping that it'll be controversial lol :)
The last line is wonderful :) Great job

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is very nice poem...it made me giggle hahaha for some reason. Well I specially the last line!

Thank you for sharing you express the emotions very clear!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vampires seems like a whole world one must study; I enjoyed reading Vampires in the Lemon Grove recently, in which the author talks about the pair of vampires that drink lemon juice getting off of the blood hunger-lust

I like the idea of the queen ruler of electricity nights, in which it is not wrong to be up late; one should not fear sleep or tiredness for the sake of adrenalin or inspiration, wherefore?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Extremely beautiful masterpiece. You couldn't have ended that in a better way. The last sentence was what got me. I applaud you on this.

Great job, Alex!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That was very lovely i loved it, when you said that "you are the queen of the vampires and sleep for you is death" that just was very wonderful, i loved this whloe work as a sum, well done my friend :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Young, Ambitious, Writer, Poet, Artist, Musician Motto: Live Young While Dying Able Favorite Author: John Grisham Favorite Book: The bible (yeah I am a Christian) Lastly seeking every experience .. more..

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