Two Beautiful Stars and a Time Apart

About love and regret...

Your smile is like flowers budding for the first time

As the sun rise for spring time right after winter ends

Beauty never been so sweet as the moon lay at your feet

God himself took his precious time in craving you

Oh sweet nightingale please let your voice be heard

Lovely melodies, wonderful poetry, you do sing

Your eyes is of fire burning with passion

As distance galaxies collide into each other

Forming wonders of the world that no one has ever seen

Or ever heard of, yet, still savior of many souls

Wanting the privilege to be granted of your presences

Many has ask to be part of and many shall never be

At last there is one close to your heart

A seedling that you did produce

And just like you she has all of your qualities

Your eyes of fire, Your smile that's a bouquet of flowers

The angles did rejoice on that day of her birth

Time was timid, Time was shy, and you did ask of him

"Would like to hold her?" She was fragile and till this day

Time only regret is that he never seized the moment....

Author's Note

Enjoy my writerscafe friends

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

Do you review poetry? I just revised something I had written last night "A Letter to Louisiana" which it is much better than the previous version, but next year were I writing a letter it could be better or much different, for I was not strict with myself in writing it and with the meter or form. This is lovely. Lovely symmetry and portrait of someone and a seedling that she did produce, a little girl child. Yes, this woman is a goddess the way you put it, when was she born? It sounds like a long time ago. It is not lovely to say so in so many words, but you have a gift of fire in the eyes of a lexicon, the words buoyed about like a buoy on ocean wave

[Alex Boyd]

Please be my editor and yes I do review poetry.... Especially when I like it... I've review some of your work... Why you ask??? and once again please be my editor I highly need one... See I'm one of those writers who writes... It's hard for me to edit my own stuff because it always sounds right in my head lol

[h d e rushin]

you do have a certain gift of fire Alex. Although a fast forwardness that every poem has to have,
it clings to the places it has to cling to effortlessly. Every poem, even the most complex,
has this sensitive, demanding attitude. "Read me and by reading me you will be better off". For those
few people of the world who write poetry, it is this infuse of some complex nutritional requirement.
But sometimes beauty secures it own path. Time makes sure of that.

A wonderful poem dear Alex. And thanks for allowing me to review it...dana

[LHD]

Well done! Enjoyed reading your poem... Beautiful and romantic! :)

[Lizardo]

This is so beautiful... I can't find words to describe it.
this is truely a great poem, enjoyable to read!

[R Smith]

beautiful writing my friend, a song of love and the birth of wonder and in the end regret, lovely words :)

[The Black Warrior]

This is absolute beautiful! so sweet, romantic, I love how it flows.
this is beautifully done Alex!

[Khyati]

Many have (not has) ask to be part of and many shall never be..
I can't say more, it's just sooooooo wonderfully wonderful! ^_^
I request you to review my write-ups too as you yourself have the blessing of such a high-level talent..

[Emily]

'Beauty never been so sweet as the moon lay at your feet'
Love this part! Great job!

[bee]

It is beautiful. The way you used simple words to describe her beauty, grasps the readers attention.

[Pajci]

Wow. I really love the use of certain words in this poem of yours! Your poem gives off a soft fluffy feeling that I like haha, keep up the good work!!

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

A very sweet poem. I liked the lines about how some people want the privilege but so many never get it. Nice job :)