Two Beautiful Stars and a Time Apart

Two Beautiful Stars and a Time Apart

A Poem by Alex Boyd
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About love and regret...

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Your smile is like flowers budding for the first time
As the sun rise for spring time right after winter ends
Beauty never been so sweet as the moon lay at your feet
God himself took his precious time in craving you
Oh sweet nightingale please let your voice be heard
Lovely melodies, wonderful poetry, you do sing

Your eyes is of fire burning with passion
As distance galaxies collide into each other
Forming wonders of the world that no one has ever seen
Or ever heard of, yet, still savior of many souls
Wanting the privilege to be granted of your presences
Many has ask to be part of and many shall never be

At last there is one close to your heart
A seedling that you did produce
And just like you she has all of your qualities
Your eyes of fire, Your smile that's a bouquet of flowers
The angles did rejoice on that day of her birth
Time was timid, Time was shy, and you did ask of him
"Would like to hold her?" She was fragile and till this day
Time only regret is that he never seized the moment....

© 2014 Alex Boyd


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Do you review poetry? I just revised something I had written last night "A Letter to Louisiana" which it is much better than the previous version, but next year were I writing a letter it could be better or much different, for I was not strict with myself in writing it and with the meter or form. This is lovely. Lovely symmetry and portrait of someone and a seedling that she did produce, a little girl child. Yes, this woman is a goddess the way you put it, when was she born? It sounds like a long time ago. It is not lovely to say so in so many words, but you have a gift of fire in the eyes of a lexicon, the words buoyed about like a buoy on ocean wave

Posted 6 Years Ago


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6 Years Ago

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you do have a certain gift of fire Alex. Although a fast forwardness that every poem has to have,
it clings to the places it has to cling to effortlessly. Every poem, even the most complex,
has this sensitive, demanding attitude. "Read me and by reading me you will be better off". For those
few people of the world who write poetry, it is this infuse of some complex nutritional requirement.
But sometimes beauty secures it own path. Time makes sure of that.

A wonderful poem dear Alex. And thanks for allowing me to review it...dana

Posted 6 Years Ago


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LHD
Well done! Enjoyed reading your poem... Beautiful and romantic! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is so beautiful... I can't find words to describe it.
this is truely a great poem, enjoyable to read!

Posted 6 Years Ago


beautiful writing my friend, a song of love and the birth of wonder and in the end regret, lovely words :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is absolute beautiful! so sweet, romantic, I love how it flows.
this is beautifully done Alex!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Many have (not has) ask to be part of and many shall never be..
I can't say more, it's just sooooooo wonderfully wonderful! ^_^
I request you to review my write-ups too as you yourself have the blessing of such a high-level talent..

Posted 6 Years Ago


'Beauty never been so sweet as the moon lay at your feet'
Love this part! Great job!

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It is beautiful. The way you used simple words to describe her beauty, grasps the readers attention.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Wow. I really love the use of certain words in this poem of yours! Your poem gives off a soft fluffy feeling that I like haha, keep up the good work!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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A very sweet poem. I liked the lines about how some people want the privilege but so many never get it. Nice job :)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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