Under a Willowed Tree

^{Under a willowed tree,}

^{alone there I lay.}

^{Beneath the setting sun,}

^{across the shallow bay.}

 

^{My routine is profound,}

^{repeated the next day;}

^{it's how I escape,}

^{makes troubles go away.}

 

^{As my thoughts unwind,}

^{nothing meant to say,}

^{I revaluate my life,}

^{upon sunset of May.}

 

^{Forever resting my head,}

^{watching Sun's blinking rays,}

^{nothing shall wake me,}

^{falling into a daze.}

 

^{Dreams of faded peace,}

^{begin to make way.}

^{Pearching upon a rock,}

^{rests a beautiful quay.}

 

^{Then the white bird,}

^{lovely as it may,}

^{turns a frightening color,}

^{one of dark-gray.}

 

^{Once shallow water ahead,}

^{starts crashing green waves.}

^{Sunset turns to night,}

^{grass turns to clay.}

 

^{Abruptly, I finally wake,}

^{confusion starts to play.}

^{Under a willowed tree,}

^{alone there I lay.}

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Wow...i love it...i loved the imagery, the flow and everything...a very good poem
Great Job :)

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this.
"Abruptly, I finally wake,
confusion starts to play.
Under a willowed tree,
alone there I lay."
That was the perfect way to end it.
I love the rhyming scheme and the flow to it.
Awesome write!
-Elissa :)

[Sarah J Dhue]

cool =] very strange, but it also makes sense

[Michelle Long]

ldf;f