Stalker

 I was walking down a narrow street on my way to some little gas station around the corner from my house. It was really dark outside and the only illumination I had was my phone and the lights from nearby houses. I heard bushes move behind me in a quick motion. My body quivered as I turn around to meet my stalker and then the next thing I know I feel this sudden pain on my neck and my attackers body hold me tight against their cold skin. I’m frozen there as the pain races through me and I scream in horror of what’s going on with my body. My attacker drops me to the ground as I hear him step back a few steps and says “I never tasted anything like that before… in the 2,000 years I been here, never in my day… I got to…” His voice drifted away as the enrages in my body and I scream louder, hoping someone would hear me and come see what this monster did to me even though I had no clue. The pain in my body was burning now and my vision became blurred, trying everything to keep me alive, I moved but the pain got even worse. I stopped moving as the pain in my body comes to an ease… so does my heart.

Author's Note

Could I make this into a longer story? And if so, how?

Reviews

[MindCage]

I could think of a few ways you could make this into a longer story, Clary. It has a strong plot line and has a really good start. Hit me back and we can talk about it.
~Don't let your mind be caged~