A Poem by Leah x

a sad poem. Kind of hurt to write 'swell... i guess this is how my sister felt.

And i saw you,
Like you saw her.
In a different light,
I breathe air.

Goodbye my lover,
the pain always fills,
the tiniest gap.
And the knife will make kills.

I see you have forgotten,
our warm rosy memories.
But i just cant forget,
the way you said you loved me.

My almost lover,
a few weeks and i was gone.
but out love lasted for years,
it started when i was born.

Now i see your walking away,
im standing in the snow.
you look around and catch a glimpse,
at the girl you used to know.

© 2010 Leah x

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loss of love always seems to leave behind this void that is filled with pain and memories of those good times...a piognant write!
i guess its pain that leads us to write exquisite and amazingly beautiful pieces like this. Wonder if its actually a negative feeling..or rather an emotion..For me pain is an underrated emotion...and emotion well narrated in this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago

ooh, I love this =)

'And i saw you,
Like you saw her.
In a different light,
I breathe air.'

really original combinations of ideas =D xx

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on December 5, 2010
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Leah x
Leah x

gravesend, United Kingdom

Hi im Leah Nicole Murray, Im thirteen year's old and go to St John's school in england, lool :P Erm.. i would write what has happened t me in my life, but not alot has yet.. i plan to have adventures.. more..