"Welcome to my faceless rage"

"Welcome to my faceless rage"

A Poem by Zack Burton
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Poem #23. Uploaded Friday November 19, 8:27 PM. From "Poetry Collection 1."

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Welcome to my faceless rage
Newborn terror, newborn age
Milky whites of seeing eyes
Open mouth in dim surprise
Little angels falling down
Burning hands from underground
Rotting nostrils sucking in
Stinking fingers grasping skin
God is hidden in this land
My face is missing, so is man
Man is missing all the points
Hammers breaking all the joints
Slow machine, prepare to fall
Faster man, I hear him call
Brain aflame with faceless rage
Newborn terror, newborn age

© 2010 Zack Burton


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Yeah - I like the beat - needs the slam of a rubbish bin lid keeping time in the background.

Posted 9 Years Ago


sledgehammer impact~ powerful writing~ words a solid punch to the gut~ reality served raw~ love it!~

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2010
Last Updated on November 24, 2010
Tags: burton, anger, change, humanity

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Zack Burton
Zack Burton

Felicity, OH



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Zack Burton. 17. Art fanatic, book fanatic, tennis fanatic. Inspirations: Joseph Heller, William Faulkner, Virginia Woolf, Emily Dickinson. Oh, and Michael Smerconish of The Big Talker 1580. .. more..

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