The Monster with Conviction.

The Monster with Conviction.

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley

retitled because the original title of "softcore" has nothing to do with anything. HAHA

I learned from a young age,
My parents lied to me.
So I developed my own skill,
I could convince you to kill.
Persuasion saved my life,
But also ruined it to the sight,
With nothing more than time on my hands,
I feel so damned.
A science fiction monster.
Descendant of Cain like Grendel and his w***e mother.
I'm no hero, let them ravage the countryside.
If he slays me...well that's life...

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley

Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
poem from 2009 just trying to get noticed. I have a lot of work.

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Nice piece.. there's a great subtle rhyme scheme in there. The last bit "well that's life" kind of detracted from it for me, but it's okay.

Nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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I like it :) I like how it flows with rhythm. It's so simple, I'm sure some of us can relate to this poem, because our parents do lie to us..

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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 24, 2010


Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT

Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..