Just 1 Summer

Just 1 Summer

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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An old poem found in a notebook from my ninth grade year

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Just one summer, not one year through.
A certain girl that I admire starts a heated ruse.
I broke a moral law, that they though wrong,
And so I started smoking for a way to stop.
All the racing thoughts, of unusual stock.
Turning me in to a monster with conviction
Named Johnny Hancock.

I'm the one who saw you, and claimed you,
That feeling you won,
When you kiss the one that you love
"So you'll wait for me?"
"Where the hell else am I to go?"

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley


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You write here with an honest, gritty feel, and it does flow like a powerful lyric. Vivid and alive with the story.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's suppose to kinda be a pop-punk song. Just never finished it so i poemed it. lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the style too. unique.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this style, its kind of nonchalant. The ending is bitter sweet. Very good writing, doll.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on September 6, 2010
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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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