The 99 Afters

The 99 Afters

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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Vague and confused teenagers right?

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I swore by the bible and christened this crown.
I will swear my revenge, and get back at this town.
Sorry you won't be there you gave up,
And the 99 afters were not the right stuff.
You joined the robots that wear makeup...

I lost my page in a book last week,
And I still can't find that page...
So I'll play these silly games,
Think of all the "ones",
And how they've added up.
I'm still the same as yesterday.
My personality won't change for you.
So my fair lady...I bid thee adieu.

And I still can't find that f*****g page.

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley


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great way to get out stress


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great, individuality must be maintained!
Powerful words friend!
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

being yourself can sometimes be tuf.... wonderful write.... nice thought......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the enigmatic quality of the last line is a nice mysterious touch that opens up a whole other line of interpretation outside of the apparent take on the sharp expression of individuality amidst the mass mind~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very thoughtful. I like your take on conformity and being yourself. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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