This Burns Her: And So She Rants and Rages

This Burns Her: And So She Rants and Rages

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
"

Hit the dance floor

"
Let us live only for loving,
And every time we enter a room together,
Let the hearts of the people stop.
Silence would signal,
That she's been cured of me,
But I can hear her screaming.

And I slur:
The shoddy, shiny emblem of my love,
Is hangin' 'round your neck,
The sole purpose of this token:
Is to taint your sublime mess of a head,
Suffusing over your holiness...

© 2010 Zackery Alan Daley


Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
Don't go toward the light.

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That was an interesting piece......rock on hun

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the last line in this:) Surreality! This is really cool work love!
Great wording in a game of rise and falling lol
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

surreality threaded between the games of love~
clever word construction/play
my favorite line by far

"taint your sublime mess of a head,"




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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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