Despite the Title

Pretty nice tell me your thoughts

At least I'll be a memory
You gave up on everything,
And took us to the shed,
Put a bullet in the back of our head.

Do not worry...it's okay.
I'm not here to abuse you verbally today...
I'm just kind of sad and glad,
I'll always be there to drive you mad.
With all the ifs, ands, ors,
Wondering what stupid w****s,
I may have jousted a time or two,
But its always been a silly game to you.

Author's Note

Old school. Out of an old notebook.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Sad and glad together, great combination when dealing with this scenario!
Great work love, bittersweet, apple pie with salt! lol
Balanced and powerful
xx

[HopelesslyDevoted]

ouch..... very interesting.... i'm not sure what else to say about this one.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

well put together story with impact in poetic form~ for some reason it brought to my mind images from the movie The Outsiders (the original one from the 80's)~which was one of the classics for me in my barely teen years~ =)~

[Zackery Alan Daley]

nice man
-ocho-

[Coyote Poetry]

Good movement and logic. Better to hang around and torture then run and cry. I like the description and the ending.
"I'm just kind of sad and glad,
I'll always be there to drive you mad."
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Miss Coral]

I like it- it's simple, but each word seems like it's woven with emotion... really strong piece. Nice write. :)

-Coral-