Soliloquy: Beauty Depends on Simplicity

Soliloquy: Beauty Depends on Simplicity

A Poem by Zackery Alan Daley
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Off the top of my head, while I am thinking straight. :) Enjoy folks.

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Alone, I spend my time on this endless gray road.  Walking toward a stickler of a pickle, in which I have no clue to act or to sit.  Play your games, clawing and gnawing the pith.  My soul hurts, or am I having a panic attack?  I no longer can tell, meaningless meanings begin to stack.  Hello, and my name is Zack.  Who, what, where, and how am I?  A boy, confused, Southern Utah, and I've been wishing I was dead since I was ten.  Death is just sleeping forever...and this world just doesn't feel right you see?  It will never be right for me.  Life is a stage and they say you can hear an invisible person from across the cantilevers and beams.  A phantom, but I can't take this mask off.  Oh, believe this is true, I want to.  There is just too much emotional glue.  Where is the spice to thicken this stew?  Is the world so bland, where is my promised land?  There she be, says the pirate at sea.  He was right, for on the forgotten shore, a girl sat upright, seemingly bursting from Earth's core.  I embrace the curvature figure, and take her hand, before she stares at me dead, and dissolves back into sand.  Life's a b***h, isn't it?  A female hound in heat, constantly bothering, quartering.  Where is the she-beast's leash?  Alas, the harlot has gotten free.  FLEE, FLEE, FLEE TOWARD THE SEA.

Robots can't handle water like you and me.

© 2011 Zackery Alan Daley


Author's Note

Zackery Alan Daley
About the robot, with human hair, and brown eyes.

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nicely done, and yes, life as a robot is very difficult

(lmao)

ok but for real i enjoyed this piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

deep!! from what I read through most your work you see very differently than most thats what intrigues me most about your writing. You never know where your mind will take another. I also feel alot of pain through your work. nice writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very very captivating in the style and wording, wonderful job on this, an excellent write for sure!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good gods above! LOL This is awesome good sir! A surreal prose that well....quite frankly has left me reeling! LOVE it! Serious kudos! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jesus, this is f*****g amazing!

The flow, the rhyme, the images. You build it up and draw the reader in. I honestly haven't read anything this good in a long time, it's beautiful.

Robots can't handle water like you and me.
Stunning.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Zackery Alan Daley
Zackery Alan Daley

Kanab, UT



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Hello my name is Zack. I have been writing since I could properly hold the pen. Then computers came around so I type up some work on this site from time to time. Thank you for checking out my conte.. more..

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