Yell

Yell

A Poem by Zachary Cothren
"

Yell, yell back at the darkness

"
 



Yell Yell Yell
Screaming at the darkness you have created
Yell Yell Yell
Telling the darkness that you have abated

Yell Yell Yell
Never ending pain twisting at your bones
Yell Yell Yell
The pain of million you can hear their moan

Yell Yell Yell
Find the pain find the source
Yell Yell Yell
Take it from its rightful course

Yell Yell Yell
Take it down your own path
Yell Yell yell
Bring down your unholy wrath

Burn
Bruise
Bash
Bang
Break
Beat
and...

Yell YELL  YEEEELLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!

© 2010 Zachary Cothren


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Well this is one way of getting crap out of your system Zachary. It always helps to express. All I can say is keep writing.

Welcome aboard

Tai, friends ship

Posted 9 Years Ago


and i for got to say this i do like this poem a bit even though it repeats makes me think of a poem i wrote to my step grandmother didnt feel very loved by her was Rough so might post it need to Twique it a bit. Take care god bless

Posted 9 Years Ago


this Poem is a little better But still the Repeating.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yell screams of zest & determination. Loved the 2nd verse a lot!
and the B's rant really nails the reason why some YELL! KUDOS!
LLR

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool write, the repetition is nice, this sounds like it could be a song. Keep it up :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great poem.
The repetition of yell certainly added to the state of distress of the persona.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 4, 2010
Last Updated on April 5, 2010
Tags: Yell, pain, bone, twisting, darkness, screaming

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Zachary Cothren
Zachary Cothren

Tracy, CA



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