Only in Time

 

So lost and confused

Within this world

Everything coming

Everything going

 

My mind

Slowly deteriorating 

All this nonsense

Happening in this world

 

My heart stops beating

Along with many others

As we watch the news today

We can barely believe what we see

 

All these picture of

Soldiers dying

Children crying

People suffering

 

All these painful moments

Lovers being lost

Children starving

People living in torment

 

 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Unfortunately this is the real world, and this is the way things are. You painted accruate picture of life as we know it today. Nice Write.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

you have a great sence of the world. great poem, babe. i agree with your views on this, as you already know. i just take my emotions and opinions on it just a little overboard. :D great poem anyway.