Never A Love So Deadly

The red rose

Can you smell that sweet sweet fragrance?

The seductive scent that brings you in ever so close

 

Red rose

That vibrant color reeling you in

Silently beggin you to pick it as your own

 

Aww...the red rose

Teaches such a wonderful lesson

Even something of such beauty can cause pain

Reviews

[A Lost Man Found]

reminds me of something i wrote called sweet tasting poison. I love it!!

[Nicole]

very good description makes me think beyond the rose and makes me think of a relationship with a person ^_^

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they have thorns sometimes...

[Anata]

Lovely :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is a great read, you made us read between the lines; we had to figure out what had caused the pain the thorns...
Yes love is like a dance on roses, if you take just one wrong step you'll get hurted by the thorns.
All in all a great job.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!
~A Fallen Heroine~

nice, i loved the words you used. it was definitely an amazing peice of work.

[Tim]

Nice poem Zandra. I like the fact that you never mentioned the thorns but implicated it through your words. Well done.

[Stacey]

Beautiful words...and I sooo understand this verse! The most beautiful rose has it's thorns, but one that loves you will remove the thorns so that you have the lovely image and sweet fragrance. That's love, that's caring...that can be anyone's tomorrow. Wonderful write!

[Blake Q Hatfield]

A beautiful poem! A good lesson that no matter how much beauty draws you near, there could be thorns should you try to take it as your own.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very nicely done.