Hate-Love Relationship

In the title.

I really hate all these stupid girls.

I hate those self-centered hoes.

They're ugly and stupid,

With way too much

Self esteem.

You're just another one of them,

Another sheep in the herd.

You lie, you cheat, you steal.

You can never make it up to me, can't apologize.

All because i couldn't keep you off my damn mind.

Author's Note

Ehhh. It ssucks. I wrote it for my English class. Review??

Reviews

[chillz]

omg wow very strong
good write
chillzxxx

[Chelsea]

First things first....
A little typo (line three),
THey're- They're
Also I'm confused though, I never did find out who this was directed to? Another one of the "self centered girls", a friend? Maybe sneak this in a line somewhere?!?! Just gives the poem a bit more to it......
But I like the message sent! Self centered girls---- stay away from them :) So true, they just bring you down....
Keep up the good writing :P