Critics ponder.

Critics ponder.

A Poem by Faye
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Im sorry I can't always be a good guy.

Im always the one to point a finger

at the error.

 

But that would not be right,

to say lies.

I cannot say that there's no flaw.

That would be both dishonest and mind numbing.

 

So in the end, I am the good guy.

I always tell the truth to help people.

 

If only that was more clear to the people

that look at me with that evil look.

 

© 2010 Faye


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Brutal Honesty turns you into the villian, but a necasarry villan we become. Great write. You're expanding your form.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Being judged, well it happens all the time.

I tend to side with the evil doers in books, films and anything fictional. Real life I'm the total opposite.

A very honest piece, I like it but I don't believe that you haven't written better.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Faye
Faye

Lincolnshire, United Kingdom



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