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A Poem by Faye
"

This is family life.

"

I thought it was mine

I thought it was Holly's

I thought it was Dana's

I thought it was Bobba's

I thought it was lucy's

I thought it was Dad's

Ithought it was Mum's

 

I think it's everyone's.

 

That's sharing for you. 

© 2010 Faye


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Excellent piece of reflections...subtle...sublime and rich in simple note.
Truly admirable.
Regards,

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a nice poem, I like how you put it togather.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I like it, the way the words punch out at you. And i like the repetition. ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice and punchy--brought a smile to my face!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 8, 2010
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Faye
Faye

Lincolnshire, United Kingdom



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