The Beautiful Night

The Beautiful Night

A Poem by WolfyZara

The night sky gleams
It seems harmless 
yes indeed
with it's light from above
But don't be tricked 
you see
For when the clocked strikes twelve
The gates open
not regular gates
but the gates of hell

A demon or two may come out
searching for it's pry
roaming the streets
looking like we do

When it comes for you it'll be too late
for you'll be in the ground
and your soul taken away

It may seem as if it was a murder
from a person you see
but it's wrong 
for a demon attacked thee

The night sky gleams 
yes indeed
but it's like a flower with poison
So be careful around the night
and beware of those creatures
for you might be their next meal.  

© 2015 WolfyZara


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WolfyZara
It's my very first poem. It might not be good but i tried. Hopefully you like it

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I love the dark twist. I don't really know what to say because anything I do say won't nearly cover how much I love this poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
It's definitely different. Your other works are much better, but I saw that this is your first piece. For your first time poetry writing this is pretty good, and the rest just show how much you've grown as a writer and abstract thinker, which you want in an author. You're not stuck at the same place, you're consistently improving. So congratulations to you :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
You are very creative :) I can tell by how much different things you brought into this poem. Nice first write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

thank you very much
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dark indeed, to mix the title, Beautiful Night with the last line, you might be their next meal. Why is it that we associate the activity of demons with night? Darkness perhaps, reduced vision, physical/mental exhaustion??? Enjoyed your piece. I like the phrase, it's like a flower with poison.


Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

thank you and be careful at night
I love it! I love how it touches on the most basic fear of every child ever, plus most adults; fear of the dark and what's in it. Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I loved it, i love how deep the writing is and how it's telling the reader how dangerous it can be at night. But I think you're giving great advice to the reader about life in general. Amazing first piece!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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