The Wish I Made

The Wish I Made

A Poem by WolfyZara

 I lay on the grass looking up in the night sky
The stars gleaming and sparkling like the sun had
I think about my future and what lays ahead
I wish for my dream to come true
but for that to happen i have to work hard
If i fail once try again, if i fail twice do it again
Never give up

I look at a star light-years away,
Yet it gleams so bright and with such beauty 
It's light never gives up 
It shines so bright
That's going to be me,
For my wish will come true

My life is important no matter what anyone says 
I will be successful for i made a wish
but for that wish to come true,
I must not give up and i must work hard
for nothing is free, 
but an education that you earn 

I'll never give up
I'll reach for the sky
and shall be one of the brightest,
for i made a wish to never give up

© 2015 WolfyZara


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WolfyZara
I hope you enjoy this one.

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Great moral. Never giving up is a hard thing to do but we try.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is a great little poem. Well written. It's great that you have such strength and that can do attitude. I totally enjoyed it.


Posted 4 Years Ago


well penned...so full of strength and hope and self worth...wonderful

Posted 4 Years Ago


Reads like a story. Then you reveal what it's about at the end. Very nice. I don't know much about poetry, but this is really pretty.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Well written and expressed!
I love the positive never say die attitude!
This piece shows us a little bit about your
strong character:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
The strength of the positivity in this poem is great! I really like the last four lines and they make a really good ending to your poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Great indication towards how you should never give up to achieve what you want. Great writing keep it up! ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

Thank you :3
that was really good :) it is easy to give up but it is even harder to push and continue on :) great job :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


WolfyZara

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Justin

4 Years Ago

your welcome, great job :)

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