appreciate artistic Nature

appreciate artistic Nature

A Poem by S.zaynab.kamoonpury

inspired by great contest

Take time to gaze and look all around you
Let divine nature absorbingly surround you
A poet has to have an eye for detail
Even lil amazing things can astound you.

The antics of a wee green grasshopper
The intricate web of the common spider
Divine art is always the enviable topper
Upon the creator's scenery be the rider

Let not daily routines so bound you
That you neglect natural nature
Materialism will just ground you
And you will miss out on natural treasure

Take time to see how God carved that leaf
How he patterned and painted that turkey
Don't just gobble it and all that fish and beef
Take hikes and picnic to the wondrous coral reef

Take time to observe nature
Make time to admire nature

© 2019 S.zaynab.kamoonpury

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Excellent thoughts and very well expressed in the details. FAB :)

Posted 9 Months Ago

I very much enjoyed your message, told with a bit of a sing-song rhythm, plus strong rhyming, which makes it feel more like kidding around, not preachy, teasingly prodding others to see more of what many people miss. Being observant is a foundation for good writing & you turn this into a fun bit of SHOW instead of tell. Good choice of details to make your point come alive (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 Years Ago

Warm thanks for your review, yeahh was poking prodding and urging the poets at least, to enjoy the .. read more

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Added on September 9, 2018
Last Updated on May 6, 2019



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