Llama Drama

Llama Drama

A Poem by S.zaynab.kamoonpury
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See the pics close up by clicking on the side pic , saw these llamas in a picture and they inspired yay.

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This flesh 'n' blood cousin of the ship 'o' the desert
here is given that funky punky , stylish haircut?
Could it be optical illusion or screen manipulation
causing him to grin in mock jubilation?

And ain't he gonna toss those bangs
like some real groovy llama?
My doesn't he look ready for any
showbiz dromedary drama?

Ah yes, he does look handsome, do come have a view
of this fuzzy, comedy dromedary beau!

Send in the paparazzi, for he's already saying cheese
But he prefers his own kind, send in some lady llamas please.

Hey, like humans, llamas can stick their tongues out
and spit to express displeasure
So keep your distance from angry ones
or you will regret the mismeasure .

The one in the picture is a cool llama teenager
but he's no teeny-bopper, for he's a teetotaller
as no one ever saw him with a bottle of gin or lager!

© 2019 S.zaynab.kamoonpury


Author's Note

S.zaynab.kamoonpury
Click on top side pic to enlarge n zoom n see it.

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I quite liked this. Good rhyming...humorous subject...told nicely.
Well done.
A good write.

Posted 6 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much for your review of this. Yes wanted to give some humour...
'Llama Drama'
Zaynab Kamanpury,
Your have done a great job with this and yes the photograph really helped. I get it. With rhyming and poetic essence you've had so much fun with this this. Llamas are comical and just plain cute. They definitely must be treated with respect as they can be obnoxious.
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 6 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

6 Months Ago

Yes they are comical n cute u r so right, warm thanks for a cool sweet comment. Yeah I guess most or.. read more
Ah, Zaynab!
How delightfully cute, funny, and witty you've expressed the nature, appearance, and personality of this wily teenage llama.
Love the rhymes and near rhymes … quite imaginative, expressing nice skills in creativity and an easy flow … very enjoyable, indeed.

Thank you ever-so gratefully for the sheer delight in sharing this excellent piece! ⁓ Richard 🍃

An idea: Display your pictures in full size above your poems, too … in that way we can enjoy the mood they set while reading. : )

Posted 7 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

7 Months Ago

Thanks woo much for a delightful review Richard.
I tried to find out how to place pics on top.. read more
Richard 🍃

7 Months Ago

You're welcome, Zatnab,
And, I thank you for the enjoyment.
To post a picture or illus.. read more
what a lovely cheerful poem. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

7 Months Ago

Yayy cheering was the intent, glad it did, warmest thanks for review!
Fresh and excitingly comical piece! Animals do some odd or 'cute' things that cause us to weigh up their intelligence... always there to amuse! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

Posted 8 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

8 Months Ago

Warmest thanks for super fun comment yayy! Take care ok.
kitty

8 Months Ago

You too! My pleasure!
What a fun write this is! I enjoyed the personification of the Llama and the rhyming. So cute. Lydi**

Posted 8 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

8 Months Ago

Warm thanks for reviewing it with a cool sweet comment! Take care!
A cheerful poem to read, and I enjoyed it. I am not sure if I understood all the words, but this poem certainly conveys a sense of humour. The comedy in the poem seems to be enhanced by the rhyming.

Posted 8 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much for comment brother/sir! Glad u could get the humour. The words I choose are a bit ha.. read more
Ok, it made me say cheese with a smile and wanted me to stick my tongue out and spit like a Llamas dose.

Posted 8 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

8 Months Ago

Thanks soo much for comment but just smile ok, spitting out maybe for a fun try lol.
Llamas, huh? Not a very pleasant animal from my experience. Constantly in a state of irritation, I find.

An interesting theme to write on. They certainly do have very different personalities. A neat write, if a little unstructured and out of rhyme scheme at times. Rhyme should always be consistent from beginning to end. At least i believe that.

Keep writing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

8 Months Ago

Warm thanks for comment n constructive criticism l ah yes my meandering muse, the rhyming just follo.. read more
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Nice rhyming in this Zaynab, and funny as well.
Well done you.

Posted 8 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

8 Months Ago

Thanks soo much for a nice cool comment! Cheers.

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