Llama Drama

Llama Drama

A Poem by S.zaynab.kamoonpury
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See the pics close up by clicking on the side pic , saw these llamas in a picture and they inspired yay.

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This flesh 'n' blood cousin of the ship 'o' the desert
here is given that funky punky , stylish haircut?
Could it be optical illusion or screen manipulation
causing him to grin in mock jubilation?

And ain't he gonna toss those bangs
like some real groovy llama?
My doesn't he look ready for any
showbiz dromedary drama?

Ah yes, he does look handsome, do come have a view
of this fuzzy, comedy dromedary beau!

Send in the paparazzi, for he's already saying cheese
But he prefers his own kind, send in some lady llamas please.

Hey, like humans, llamas can stick their tongues out
and spit to express displeasure
So keep your distance from angry ones
or you will regret the mismeasure .

The one in the picture is a cool llama teenager
but he's no teeny-bopper, for he's a teetotaller
as no one ever saw him with a bottle of gin or lager!

© 2019 S.zaynab.kamoonpury


Author's Note

S.zaynab.kamoonpury
Click on top side pic to enlarge n zoom n see it.

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Leo
loved the energy in your poem..

Posted 1 Month Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much for the feedback!
dear Zaynab... I ran with five young Llamas on a few Acres of land owned by family. They were Pets, but were always distracted by their Natural Instincts and never paid attention to
My running along with them. Now I could never keep up with them in my Silver years. Your poetry is a Treasure. Truly, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

5 Months Ago

Wow lucky you , you actually got to run and play wirh llamas! Here in Tanzania where I now live you .. read more
This was funny. Very entertaining and clever:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

9 Months Ago

Hi warm thanks for the comment, glad if it made yah laugh. Take care.
I quite liked this. Good rhyming...humorous subject...told nicely.
Well done.
A good write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for your review of this. Yes wanted to give some humour...
'Llama Drama'
Zaynab Kamanpury,
Your have done a great job with this and yes the photograph really helped. I get it. With rhyming and poetic essence you've had so much fun with this this. Llamas are comical and just plain cute. They definitely must be treated with respect as they can be obnoxious.
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Yes they are comical n cute u r so right, warm thanks for a cool sweet comment. Yeah I guess most or.. read more
Ah, Zaynab!
How delightfully cute, funny, and witty you've expressed the nature, appearance, and personality of this wily teenage llama.
Love the rhymes and near rhymes … quite imaginative, expressing nice skills in creativity and an easy flow … very enjoyable, indeed.

Thank you ever-so gratefully for the sheer delight in sharing this excellent piece! ⁓ Richard 🍃

An idea: Display your pictures in full size above your poems, too … in that way we can enjoy the mood they set while reading. : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Thanks woo much for a delightful review Richard.
I tried to find out how to place pics on top.. read more
Richard 🍃

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, Zatnab,
And, I thank you for the enjoyment.
To post a picture or illus.. read more
what a lovely cheerful poem. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Yayy cheering was the intent, glad it did, warmest thanks for review!
Fresh and excitingly comical piece! Animals do some odd or 'cute' things that cause us to weigh up their intelligence... always there to amuse! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Warmest thanks for super fun comment yayy! Take care ok.
kitty

1 Year Ago

You too! My pleasure!
What a fun write this is! I enjoyed the personification of the Llama and the rhyming. So cute. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Warm thanks for reviewing it with a cool sweet comment! Take care!
A cheerful poem to read, and I enjoyed it. I am not sure if I understood all the words, but this poem certainly conveys a sense of humour. The comedy in the poem seems to be enhanced by the rhyming.

Posted 1 Year Ago


S.zaynab.kamoonpury

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for comment brother/sir! Glad u could get the humour. The words I choose are a bit ha.. read more

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