Autumn's ceremony 🍁

Click to zoom in close up to side pic This is about Autumn with a blend of eastern and western terms to describe the autumnal season and colours and to embody the commonly heard phrase, " she was marr

🍁🍁 🍁 A bevy of  invisible houris
and imaginary fairies,
cavorted about as elfin brides
under a saffron maple tree🍁🍁🍁
Dressed in prism-hued layers
of chiffon in ethereal shimmers
and delicate silken gossamers
They having their group wedding in the fall
And fairy folk bustled about all round
as flimsy and flighty as they could be
while saffron leaves fell upon the brides🍁🍁🍁
🍁🍁🍁 in ceremonial nuptial
An autumn's ritual
and as nature's pretty confetti! 🍁🍁🍁

Branches denuded
Yet autumn's august
for the wilting's ravishing!
🍁🍁🍁 The willowy fairies, with nylon veils
almost drowned and veiled
in henna fallen maple leaves as well
Playing hide 'n'seek🍁🍁🍁
with browny brownie grooms
also camouflaged in the heap...🍁🍁🍁
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Author's Note

Click to zoom in close up to side pic
This is about Autumn with a blend of eastern and western terms to describe the autumnal season and colours and to embody the commonly heard phrase, " she was married in the Fall"

Reviews

[carl]

enjoyed the read. Makes me think of Phantastes by George MacDonald. Very impressionistic in it imagery. Lots of fairy-story illusions, well expressed without being to literal. Thank you for the post -carl

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the days of Autumn. Only bad part. Winter is coming ASAP. I enjoyed the set-up and the thoughts in the poetry. Thank you my dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dave]

The pictures you paint with your words and beautiful. You bring to ; life the awesome colors that autumn displays for us.

Take care - Dave

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks soo much for autumnal feedback.

[Pete]

wow. love the imagery and wording. i could envision the celebratory colors, and leaves parachuting down as summer respectfully bows to autumn. your words are as crisp as autumn itself. wonderful celebration of a most magical time. bravo ... :)

p.s. sorry i took so long. been away from the cafe for a bit.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks soo much poet, for the great cool feedback, cheers and enjoy the seasons.🍁

[Fran Marie]

A lovely and descriptive
poem on the fall season
when nature bring us
vivid and vibrant colors
autumn really is
"pretty confetti! 🍁🍁🍁"

Wonderfully written

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Warmest thanks for a seasoned nature comment dear,🍁🌷

[JE Falcon]

"This is about Autumn with a blend of eastern and western terms to describe the autumnal season' --- and it does it so well. :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks soo much for a bright seasoned comment yayy! Cheers and best wishes,🍁

[keith]

i had to look up a few words but all in all there is a message of beauty of nature's wonder, the changing colors of fall and an imaginative gathering of the elfin and fairy kind.
a delicate depiction worthy of notice

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Thanks soo much for comment, i used only two terms that are not commonly used by non eastern poets so yeah cheers,

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Lady Zaynab 🍂

Thank you ever-so much for creating and bringing to life this delightfully entertaining world of fairytale wonderment to inspire the most imaginatively magical wedding in the wee land of fairy fae enchantment.
Fraught with imagery and spellbinding metaphor, you've so skillfully combined Eastern and Western fascinations in such ways that they weave seamlessly one into the other … and, I really admire how you've so creatively set the wondrous scene with angels and wee magical folk dancing and playing around together, for us to marvel at:
🍁🍁🍁 A bevy of invisible houris
and imaginary fairies,
cavorted about as elfin brides
under a saffron maple tree.🍁🍁🍁
Your artwork and maple leaf choices are the perfect mood enhancers … muahhh*

Brilliantly, beautifully done, Dear Lady-Poet.
You make me wish I could be there to witness and enjoy it all! ⁓ Richard🍃

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Hii our fab poet Richard, its more funful , enjoyable reading your interesting comments than typing my poem.
Your wishing to be in the scenery, yeahh as fav poets we get into each other's minds so we see things with each other's eyes for a change. New outlooks and we mutually enjoy each others poetry Richard.
Thanks soo much for super comment!🍁

[Nima.Hope]

"Dressed in prism-hued layers
of chiffon in ethereal shimmers
and delicate silken gossamers"
These lines are amazing Zaynab. Vivid imagination while reading this poem. Thanks for sharing it

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

I thought i wasn't that good at imagination, coz im more reality oriented but your nice comment encourages me. Thanks a bunch,

[Nima.Hope]

You're welcome Zaynab.

[Patricia]

Fun and full of fancy and a all around pleasant poetic adventure, well done :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Im glad this was as fun as i intended. Warm thanx for lovely comment, 🍁