I Might Steal A Kiss

I might steal a kiss..
Might take a trip...
My arms around your waist..
And find my place in your personal space..
Engage your soul as I examine the curves of your face..
While my hands have other plans..
Of drawing a physical silouette so sublime..
Right here.. right now.. Your house or mine..
Forgive me for skipping "Hi"..
Ever feel like if you didnt take what was yours you would die?..
Thats why..
I'm skipping the trivial introduction..
And prepping you for the Manifestation of Lust and...
Putting you in this moment off guard..
In my attempt to make it sooooooooo hard..
For you to say no..
You know how far I want to go..
These moments come so few.. you know what i want to do..
So let it ride..
Baby..
Let it ride..

Reviews

[jay-lyse]

I like the chemistry and the lust hidden away in this piece. I can picture this truly taking place ... it would be an awesome pick up line, "Engage your soul as I examine the curves of your face, While my hands have other plans of drawing a physical silhouette so sublime" --- Favorite line --- Forgive me for skipping Hi --- very smooth.
Like always GREAT WRITE!!!!

[That_Girl]

I can't for the life of me figure out why there are periods after each line. I don't think it effects the poem either way, just trying to understand lol

I really like it! Not what I was expecting from the title but I'm glad it went this route... really good! :D

[Xeru]

Thank you That_Girl.. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I use periods because it has become a part of my writing style. Even my speech for the most part. Just have my own way. I'm not overly concerned about grammer even tho I could write using proper English and diction etiquette. Just not a nessasity as a artist. Think of it as the kid that didnt bother coloring in the lines but still liked the drawing. But thanks for the love.... love.

[That_Girl]

Like I said, doesn't make a difference to me, I was just curious. :) haha you're welcome. :)

[Steven]

You mean ellipses.

[That_Girl]

Stop stalking me. And no, I purposely didn't say that cause not each line ended in three dots. Ellipses are in sets of three, no? Dots, periods, whatever... most lines had two.

[Steven]

Can't help it you are always on my home page. They are still ellipses, only incorrectly formatted ;). Poetic license. But more likely just a lazy index finger

[That_Girl]

Incorrect is incorrect. They. Are. Dots. >:) So shut up and if you're going to stalk me out, the least you could do is make it private so no one else knows about you're creepiness. Hmph. ;p

[Steven]

That makes no sense :)

I sashay my creepiness

[That_Girl]

I make complete sense in everything I say. ;p

This is true... O.o

[Sirius King]

nice