Your love

Your love

 

You are my stars. The bars that

contain me through an apocalypse.

Without you life would be life but

meaningless because I would be

searching for your smile through

out the smiles.

 

My planet evolves around you

You are my Sun. My light. You

give me the chills. People complain

when you are shining up high for me,

but they do not know how bright my

heart shines in your presence.

 

In your presence, the present

becomes perfect.

For you I would try and rewrite the

stars. Our love is eternal. I was born

to make you proud. We are family

Your words touch my heart.

 

I will make you proud. I am in deep

love with you. When you hold me

I feel every atom of your warmth.

I love you.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

A beautiful dedication to another beautiful soul I love this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow....feeling "every atom of your warmth" wish i had thought of that line.

that is intense love...the poem made me imagine such love...and also had me trying to figure out how we could revise the stars to make them shine even more.
j.

[Zipho_D]

Lol we gotta make them shine...We have to try for that special being.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely romantic declaration of a passionate love that give the reader the impression of a romantic man who is wooing the woman of his dreams.