Let me

Let me

A Poem by Zipho_D
"

Let me be the shoulder you can lean on

"

            Let me

 

A smile is always on your

gorgeous face. Your voice makes

my heartbeat in an upper pace.

A single glance at you brings

me peace. Trust me. I will never break your

heart even a single piece.

 

In our love I'm in too deep, but even a

smile like that is on your face.

I know your pain. You cry at night.

By day you pretend everything is

okay. Okay, I am going to be the shoulder

you can cry on.

 

Be the reason you smile because all I wish

to be is your lover. Be your warm, happy

summer. Let me hold you closer, and

together we could grow older. When

it comes to you I would never procrastinate.

To me you fascinate.

 

Now let me be that reality prince

charming. Baby quit whining. Loving

emotions are what I have for you.

Charming is what I will be to you.

 

© 2019 Zipho_D


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This is an uninhibited expression that reflects how many people feel about being in a relationship or friendship . . . that is, they want to be THERE for the other person, in good times as well as bad times. My hesitation comes when a person sees me as broken & thinks he has the key to fix me. This poem has a tiny edge to it, like with such a line as this: "baby quit whining" -- this tells me that my weak spots are not really being celebrated by this narrator. I would be afraid this guy would only want to glorify himself as my savior, making me happy & taking away my blues. I know this is a complex comment . . . and as I said, on the surface your message seems to be unintentionally anything but just admiring this person & wanting to be there for her (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


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intrigued by this write, full of emotions.
nicely written

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an uninhibited expression that reflects how many people feel about being in a relationship or friendship . . . that is, they want to be THERE for the other person, in good times as well as bad times. My hesitation comes when a person sees me as broken & thinks he has the key to fix me. This poem has a tiny edge to it, like with such a line as this: "baby quit whining" -- this tells me that my weak spots are not really being celebrated by this narrator. I would be afraid this guy would only want to glorify himself as my savior, making me happy & taking away my blues. I know this is a complex comment . . . and as I said, on the surface your message seems to be unintentionally anything but just admiring this person & wanting to be there for her (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Rye
very intriguing write here, nicely expressed

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Zipho_D
Zipho_D

Pietermaritzburg, Elandskop, South Africa



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