"Don't Leave Me Here"

"Don't Leave Me Here"

Don't leave me here all alone,
With nothing, not even a bone.
Where are you going?
Please, I need you to give me some lovin'.

I know I may haven't been real to you,
But please, just stay here, I want you to.
If you give me one more chance,
You'll see that I can do more than just dance.

Written by Zoe Anne

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Dear Zoe Anne,
You submitted a lot of writing into my group. Most of which I won't be able to read for now. I have pages more to review. You're writing alone takes up 1 and a 1/2 pages. So for now. I will review this poem. Please understand.

This poem has great flow, great meaning and is very relatable. "
Please just stay here, I want you to."
So many people can relate to those very words! Great job!

[Akshat♥]

i like this poem...this is undergoing my feelings.