"7 Hearts"

"7 Hearts"

A Poem by Zoe Anne

"7 Hearts"

One.
I think you're the one.
Two.
I love you.
Three.
You love me.
Four.
We dance across the floor.
Five.
Let's keep it alive.
Six.
Don't just drop it like a ton of bricks.
Seven.
It feels like I'm in heaven.
Seven hearts;
Together we'll create pop art.

Written by Zoe Anne

© 2010 Zoe Anne


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Interesting word choice at the end and through out the poem. I just kind of feel like you picked the words so that it all rhymed and had flow which made the poem feel a bit forced. However in doing so you did create good flow though some of what you said didn't make the most sense. Still great job and keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Zoe Anne
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I like to write a lot of horror, poetry, and lyrics. My inspirations are Edgar Allan Poe, Anne Rice, H.P. Lovecraft, and Stephen King. I hope that someday my name will be next to theirs... more..

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