A little more

In this messed up world
Where no one tries
I try a little more
where no one cares
I care little more
where people only listen to reply
I involve little more
Where people feel nothing
I feel a little more
Where people look for comfort
I try to catch with night
Where technology has become part of life
I walk a little more
Where no one knows the value of time
I keep awake to talk little more
In the messed up world
where no one cares
I care little more
where people give up early
I keep up a little more
Where no one listens
I listen a little more
where people love you for their means
I love a little more

Reviews

[Lathen Griffiths]

This is extremely thought provoking and the lines of yours that made me think the most were your lines “where people only listen to reply
I involve little more” it is said that a large percentage of people are thinking how they will reply to someone before the other person has finished speaking… Much food for thought.

Best Wishes,

Lathen.

[Zoey]

thank you for your thoughts

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the postive message of this poem. It reminds me of the lyrics in Garth Briiks "The Change"- "As long as one heart still holds on then hope is never really gone."

[Zoey]

Thank you .....

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I wish all people would be "a little more" like this poem. It is one of the best examples to live one's life. Very nice work Zoey.

[Zoey]

Thanks you