haiku

My first haiku

Red leaves fall gently

fluttering across the sky

creating visions

Author's Note

I'm not sure if I did the syllables correctly...? But this is my first haiku. I want to learn more about real forms of poetry, so let me know if I am doing this correctly! Also, the photograph was taken by me. I love photography as well.

Reviews

[Chris]

5 - 7 - 5, nature themed... and meaning full. Read well and left thoughts in its wake.

[Bobbo600]

I really liked the poem and great picture to go with it. Its not quite a traditional haiku tho' The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables.