Neon Tears

Neon Tears

A Poem by Alexa Tasch

She sits alone in the music room

Every note struck

Ringing hollow and broken

For why is she here,

If there is no tune?


She dances in the moonlight


Sharp breathes and spins

Echo round

But why is she here alone?


Neon tears rolling down her cheeks

She sits under a tree alone

She doesn’t know why she’s there

Or why no one is around


What is the purpose of this girl?

Living solemn life in many ways?

She cannot find her purpose now

But maybe will some day


For now she cries neon tears

Waiting to be called

And then the moment

She’s been waiting for

Finally once and for all


A man holds out his hand

His hat is as fluffy

As his white cravat


Neon tears stain his apron

As she welcomes his embrace

She cooked to live

But lives to cook

For that is her purpose in life

© 2012 Alexa Tasch

Author's Note

Alexa Tasch
Just something I was fooling around with, tell me what you think!
Iwon't be offended if you don't like it I was just kind of bored

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Princess Tutu! in the beginning^^ thats what it reminded me of, but then I wasn't reminded of it any more as the poem took on a life of its own. very ceartive, cute, and excellent peom!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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i realy love this :3 imagining a girl crying neon tears. . .thats wounderfuly un herd of before(or at least i would never had thought of that) i love this, and this (in my opinion) poems words are true to what people can be to life may the be male or female

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

oh an ur wellcome haha :3
Alexa Tasch

10 Years Ago

boring classes are grat for inspiration!

10 Years Ago

omg right? XD haha
I thought it was interesting and made me picture the woman and her pain then the end made me smile because he came to her.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Alexa Tasch

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!!
Everyone is wondering why they are here, what we are doing. I like she found hers. I hope we are all as lucky.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Alexa Tasch

10 Years Ago

Thanks and I hope so too!
I loved this! It shows that we all are looking for our purpose in life.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Alexa Tasch

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
love the descriptions, this is a very unique idea, the neon tears. I really like it and think that you should keep playing arounjd with it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Alexa Tasch

10 Years Ago

thanks! I think I might!
Aw it was cute, sounded like something that could evolve into a short story.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on September 12, 2012
Last Updated on September 12, 2012
Tags: neon, tears, music, dark, moon, night, writing, cooking, life, choices, love, hobbies, fun, sad, dance, dancing, art, teen, drama, hope, chef, food, alone


Alexa Tasch
Alexa Tasch

Providence, RI

My name is Alexa. I'm 19. I usually write instead of paying attention in my classes so I will post anything I think it good enough. Don't read my older stuff unless you're really committed because.. more..


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