Invisible Storm

Invisible Storm

A Poem by Alexa Tasch
"

Anger is an invisible storm

"

The quiet hills felt the breeze

That slew the birds and killed the trees

The people continued as they pleased

Ignorant as they danger increased

 

And over the horizon came the invisible storm

Of thunder clouds that took the form

Of sunny skies bright and warm

No one saw the invisible storm

 

Thunder didn't sound in the sky

Lightning didn't blink an eye

God watched as the storm passed by

And let all the guilty people die

 

Acid rain came pelting down

Drowning everyone in the town 

The wind shattered the golden crown

Until the rivers ran red and brown

 

The royals gone without complaint

With death of every sinner, every saint

The invisible storm grew more faint

And left the town desolate and quaint

© 2013 Alexa Tasch


Author's Note

Alexa Tasch
just found this and was working on it. Must have been pretty pissed when I wrote it

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I loved how you made the word at the end of every line rhyme in each stanza. I try to to that sometimes, but the message gets lost and it doesn't flow as well. Yours flowed very well and the message was clear and amazing. It is a beautiful poem (is it pattern for you to writer really great poetry when you're angry?)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Well then you should get angry more often..;) Loved it!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


An entertaining read for me. I like it. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

4 Years Ago

why thank you!
Hits home for me. You're flow is very good and the writing in general is very well done too

Posted 4 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

4 Years Ago

aw thank you!
Wonderful.You surely have talent for poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Great writing! Wow.....I need to drink what you drink then.....:)......no seriously, sometimes when I get into a serious introspective mood, nothing calms me down until I have penned down what was stuck in my soul....

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is so well written and imagery is off the hook, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

4 Years Ago

Thank you!!
This is such a visual poem! All I can say is wow lol.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

4 Years Ago

I totally forgot about this one! I'm glad you like it!! :)
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K.G
Sounded like the storm that had passed by my a few weaks ago xD hi! I'm alive! Srry for not being around

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alexa Tasch

6 Years Ago

That's alright I haven't been around much either
K.G

6 Years Ago

XD Well, at least we know no one didn't kidnapp u xD

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Added on March 23, 2013
Last Updated on March 23, 2013
Tags: anger, storm, evil, dark, death, god, sin, sinner, saint, acid, thunder, lightning, nature, mad, emotion, life, drama

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Alexa Tasch
Alexa Tasch

Providence, RI



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My name is Alexa. I'm 19. I usually write instead of paying attention in my classes so I will post anything I think it good enough. Don't read my older stuff unless you're really committed because.. more..

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