Not Alone

Not Alone

A Poem by ASandyRabbit
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I feel calm, empathy beside me
I do care, rose petals emotionally
Fluttering about in a great breeze
A gentle breeze, swelling out for leagues
You wait for me patiently
I’m sorry I can’t be faster,
I love that you are so lovely
Foreign feelings filling inside of me:
Love

© 2016 ASandyRabbit


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Wow!
Love as a foreign feeling is so alien to me that I went wow for the author feeling not pity but sad and wishing Love to them.
One of the most moving poems I've read on here.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 5, 2016
Last Updated on December 5, 2016
Tags: ASandyRabbit, Friendship, Depression, Empathy, Kindness

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ASandyRabbit
ASandyRabbit

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I'm a young experimental writer still in that phase of everything I write is bad, but I want to improve. Please give me feedback. Tear me to shreds, in fact. I'll be able to improve from it :) I've.. more..

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