Scattered.

Scattered.

A Poem by Dani

Crawling,

                     fighting,

                                    biting,

             clawing

Fingers breaking,

        aching,

       groping,

      mauling

                         Frustration,

              anger,

                         pain

              and hurt

           Sky,                        air,

           sidewalk,              dirt

                          Sighing,

         singing, 

                           crying,

         feeling

E

m

o

t

i

o

n

s

enough                                 to                            send                        me                             reeling

                                 Heartache, devastation,

                                       happy and free

                   All these things you've done to me

Hopeful,

                brigher,

                               laughing,

                  smiles

Not-nows,

laters,

and in-a-whiles

                                     Spinning,

                                    seething,

     r

    e

     j

    e

    c

    t

    i

   o

   n,

                                   misgive

Sorrys,

"I love yous",

heartsong,

....

...

..

.

ad-lib

    Dancing, caring,

                               j       e      a      l      o     u     s     y.

                           All these things you've done to me

© 2009 Dani


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Author's Note

Dani
I know its written in a weird kinda form, but its readable :]

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"Not-nows,
laters,
and in-a-whiles"

These are by far my favorite lines. You use those phrases that seem to mean nothing to someone and show that they actually impact you in a big way. ;) I know how you feel :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very readable, I like your style.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very creative, I totally enjoyed reading your poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thanks for the reviews guys, you all made me smile :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is amazing!
And you say you can't write poetry.
I am in awe of your talent young lady, haha. =]

Now...time for more stuff. =D

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's like I'm dancing while I read this. Nice. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


agh, i love this. it has the cadence and colour of a kaleidoscope. good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its a weird, unique form.
I like it
It's its own little story.
And with a title that is oh so appropriate.
Nice. =D

Posted 13 Years Ago


COol!

- Kriss

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2009

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Dani
Dani

On my way to Wonderland.



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