Luna

Luna

A Poem by Parin

Luna
Friday, March 13, 2020

10:29 AM



She was like the moon,

a part of her always remained hidden,

always remained undiscovered.


© 2020 Parin


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Parin
just a small fragment :)

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I really like this poem!!
I wondered if it could be improved by removing the first 'always'.
Hope that is helpful.
Cheers,
Alison.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Except when she is full and bloating with light. Then she reveals her secrets. Nice lines. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love the concept. It's easy to visualize and know exactly what you mean.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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