crumpled

You crumpled my heart,

just as casually as you step and crumple the useless fallen leaves.

I then realized that there I no point to sit and grieve.

I thought that I could trust you again,

but oh I was wrong.

 

You broke me again,

but this time it made me indefinitely strong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Alison Barker]

I really like the last two lines. A powerful and strong ending.
I wondered if it would be better if the word indefinitely was taken out.
I also wondered if it would be better if the word 'stepped' was taken out.
It seemed obvious that she/he stepped.
These comments are subjective.
I am no expert. Just another poet.