Deep

Deep

A Poem by @_av_poetry
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Something different.

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Dust if you must,

But isn't it better

To fill your thoughts with lust?


My thoughts are full of images

Of you in all your glory.

I think of all the romances,

Ours makes the greatest story.


My blood runs hot with memories,

Of eyes half-shut and moans.

First love my heart and spirit,

Then love me to my bones.

© 2019 @_av_poetry


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I’m always dusting my memory sometimes I get so caught up in it I forget to make new ones:) clever writing AV

Posted 4 Years Ago


@_av_poetry

4 Years Ago

We all get caught up in the past sometimes. It's not a crime. Just don't let it stop you from enjoyi.. read more
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Oh how we change as we age, lust and lager now replaced by cocoa and companionship.....jeepers I'm dull :))

Posted 4 Years Ago


@_av_poetry

4 Years Ago

Everything has it's time. Nothing wrong with cocoa and companionship. Thanks for sharing your though.. read more
the sensual and the romantic create such a fine blend in this poem.
I like this a lot.

Posted 4 Years Ago


@_av_poetry

4 Years Ago

Glad you liked it. Thank you. :)
love that last line...reminds me of a line in a john mellancamp song..."sink your teeth right through my bones'---
"Hurt so Good"----yes...

a very sensual piece here...but subtle and poetic.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


@_av_poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I've never written anything like it. It was an experiment. I'm glad it was successful.
Interesting! I guess when we were younger and without responsibilities we could simply do what we wanted when we wanted. And hey someone has to dust!

Posted 4 Years Ago


@_av_poetry

4 Years Ago

Haha someone has to dust indeed. Thanks for your review :)

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Added on June 17, 2019
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