Pain

Pain

A Poem by Art Freeman
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just came out...

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Painstaking

Pain hastens

Fastens itself

To pleasant faces


Joy's wasted

Friends misplace it

My pen tastes

...

Tears

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© 2009 Art Freeman


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I'm impressed. If you could read a few of my poems and give me your honest opinion I would appreciate it. I respect your work and because of that will respect your opinion. I just ask for brutal honestly...anything less isnt worth the energy it takes to write a review.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think this was a great write. It made me smile because it is what I'm feeling right now...and have been for the last few days. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm impressed. If you could read a few of my poems and give me your honest opinion I would appreciate it. I respect your work and because of that will respect your opinion. I just ask for brutal honestly...anything less isnt worth the energy it takes to write a review.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As the others below me said , this is a excellent write.
Very rarley do I read a short piece with such intensity. You made it seem effortless.

Great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pain hastens
Fastens itself
To pleasant faces

A daily occurrence.....that we see, and write........a stunning piece, said with little words, but full impact of their weight......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it certainly does fasten itself to pleasant faces...that is my favorite part for sure.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow Art! I am being kicked in the face today with short poems.

"Fastens itself
To pleasant faces"

That it does. I love when people can convey so much in so few words. I am glad you are still around here. I just came back since the big crash and its good to see faces i can rely upon for a great read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow..i'm speechless.
This was beautiful and powerful..
100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So little words, and yet it is still relatable. Short and to the point. I like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are amazing Poet. In so few words. You said so much. Tears are all we have when we waste all the good things in a life.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Art Freeman
Art Freeman

Brooklyn, NY



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