Pain

just came out...

Painstaking

Pain hastens

Fastens itself

To pleasant faces

Joy's wasted

Friends misplace it

My pen tastes

...

Tears

...

Reviews

[William Maisonave]

I'm impressed. If you could read a few of my poems and give me your honest opinion I would appreciate it. I respect your work and because of that will respect your opinion. I just ask for brutal honestly...anything less isnt worth the energy it takes to write a review.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a great write. It made me smile because it is what I'm feeling right now...and have been for the last few days. Thanks for sharing.

[BLACKCRUSH]

As the others below me said , this is a excellent write.
Very rarley do I read a short piece with such intensity. You made it seem effortless.

Great work.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW this is magic right here!

[Bubo]

Pain hastens
Fastens itself
To pleasant faces

A daily occurrence.....that we see, and write........a stunning piece, said with little words, but full impact of their weight......

[wolfshrew]

it certainly does fasten itself to pleasant faces...that is my favorite part for sure.

[Glenn Davis]

Wow Art! I am being kicked in the face today with short poems.

"Fastens itself
To pleasant faces"

That it does. I love when people can convey so much in so few words. I am glad you are still around here. I just came back since the big crash and its good to see faces i can rely upon for a great read.

[Nicole]

Wow..i'm speechless.
This was beautiful and powerful..
100/100

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

So little words, and yet it is still relatable. Short and to the point. I like that.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are amazing Poet. In so few words. You said so much. Tears are all we have when we waste all the good things in a life.
Coyote