Chaotic Universe

Chaotic Universe
I still recall her red hair and distinctive flavor.
Chaotic!
She made you hold your breath!
The colorful memory of the vibrant scenery!
The astonishment she gave colliding,
As play challenged and relaxed her face,
As on the heights and lows of the hologram, conceived on
human flesh!
As on heartfull beat,
Ever-expanding,
She emitted the sparkle of bouncing stars,
Beautifully unshaped.
Like the universe!

Reviews

[Twilight]

Sometimes, a woman can make a lasting impact upon someone; as if like a powerful cosmic force in the universe.?

You seem to have conveyed the awesome power which a woman can have, to dazzle those around her.

Indeed, it can be a breathtaking experience for any man; who finds a woman who seems to offer that rapport. That tantalising aura.

[a_methyste]

This poem is about a sexy chaotic girl.

[Twilight]

Yes, thanks for clarifying. Quite often, that sexiness and chaos go together for such women; in my experience. I do find that it helps to hold my interest, having caught my attention in the first place. Indeed, my review observations were about the seemingly cosmic power; of such women. In terms of how, their dazzling charms can impact upon men.

[Twilight]

So, I had to reflect primarily upon your choice of words; of course. They included no sexiness, but initial charm can be created prior to that stage; whilst a woman is trying to attract the attention of a guy.

[a_methyste]

When you are chaotic you are sexy too.

[Twilight]

Yes, I agree that can be so.