Gloomy days

Gloomy days!
The revenge of a distraction.
The promise of a trance.
Underground corridors,
In symmetrical blues.
Drunk heels and corners,
I cannot tell.
I do not understand!?
I do not!
Another distraction.
The verge of a revenge.
A ghost today?
You wish it were true.
Oh! So much!
But it is not.
It is not!
The verge of a distraction!
If only it were real!?
If only you were!
If i could
Escape
It
Gloomy days!
I reach out.
I find it
Another revenge
Cemetry of a distraction!

Reviews

[Twilight]

"Symmetrical blues", sounds like a slightly surreal term; here perhaps.

This piece seems to reach out, with the desperation of lonely despair; telling of a woman in need of a real man.

It's emotionally strong and turbulent, in keeping with the main topic of this piece. At least it's genuine too, rather than some of the flowery "perfect world" kind of nonsense; which seems fashionable on this website (these days). I can be reached by email too, and my address is mentioned within my profile on here.

[a_methyste]

I sent you my email address.