WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN?

WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN?

A Poem by aaron

WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN ?  
                         
                          I have no make up on

                           I have bed head

                             I 'm sick

                             I'm grumpy

                             I'm moody

                             My body changes
                        
                            I'm old with gray hair

                            I 'm wrinkley

                                       

© 2010 aaron


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Someone that says "no" to any of these questions obviously doesn't love the narrator. These are all inevitabilities that we all will face. Anyone not willing to endure it with the other should just walk away to begin with. These are just among the many difficulties that we all have to deal with. Many just simply can't handle it but recklessly engage in the relationship anyway. Oh well. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very nice poem. The problem when the girl get older so does the boy. Must grow wiser and expand love to more and complete emotion. Your poem ask a very good question. Time is the test of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


ok, so I love the sentiment behind this one..:)
And a great question to ask too....but I'm sure the right person would...
a couple of little grammatical errors here, but nothing major......easy to fix.
Good write, and I look forward to reading more of your words....

Posted 11 Years Ago


ya thanks very much

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this poem because it expresses how relationships shouldn't be so suprerficial and based on the physical aspects of the people in them

Posted 11 Years Ago


thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


I as myself these questions a lot whenever I'm in a relationship with someone. I would like to think I'm not so shallow. It is a conundrum...well to me anywayz. It's honest and fragile...overall relatable and sensitive. I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


thanx

Posted 11 Years Ago


kool

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is really cool!
Simple and Honest! ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago



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marion, OH



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