WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN?

WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN?

A Poem by aaron

WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN ?  
                         
                          I have no make up on

                           I have bed head

                             I 'm sick

                             I'm grumpy

                             I'm moody

                             My body changes
                        
                            I'm old with gray hair

                            I 'm wrinkley

                                       

© 2010 aaron


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you like it everyone

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Cool, interesting and simple, short and sweet I like it.

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thanks

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good stuff! very well done....

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thanks really thanks

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Simple and honest, like anything that means something is supposed to be. I like that. :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


you really think I'm a good writer

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you are welcome there

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thanx

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this is really awesom and i love it and you did really good and i like this poem and you are a good writer

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aaron
aaron

marion, OH



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